My peers mainly advised that I don't summarize the movie as much and to analyze certain parts of my paper more clearly. I had a few typos here and there and someone commented about the clarity of my writing. Mason's and Abby's feedback was really helpful and they gave me a lot to consider as I reform and finish my final draft. In the final draft my thoughts on what the seen revealed about the movie should hopefully be clearer and my analysis more detailed. I am writing about 2 scenes in particular and I will write as such instead of the reader being confused that I am only talking about one.